It is time to prove to me
that my tutorials are not in vain! Below is a write-up I saw on Facebook,
spiced with glaring errors that cannot be overlooked in English. I want you to state and correct them using the comment box on the blog. The number of errors you are able
to spot will determine the weight of the token you will receive from Tammy's
English blog.
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1. Family is not what it used to be.
ReplyDelete2. Now everbody chooses who they want to deal with.
3. Cousins talk about one another like they are not flawed.
Donald Ozoilo.
*Brother's and sister's... Instead of "Brothers and sisters"
ReplyDelete*It use to be a time ... Instead of "used to be"
*...and just have a good time... Instead of "and just have good times"
*Now everybody choose who... Instead of "Now everyone chooses who"
- Uche Peters
Enter your comment...Family is not what it used to be. There used to be a time where you could go to your grandma's house to eat. Brothers and sisters treat friends more like family. Cousins discuss one another as if they are not themselves flawed.
ReplyDelete1.Family isn't what it use to be,
ReplyDelete2.Now everybody chooses whom they wanna deal with
3.Cousins talk about one another like they've got no flaws.
#Celebrate
1. family is not what it used to be.
ReplyDelete2. Now, everyone is choosing who they want to deal with.
3. Cousins talking about each other like they are not flaws.
Felix, 08146216129
1.Family is not what it used to be
ReplyDelete2.it used to be a time.......
3.you could go to your grandma's house to eat.
4.now everybody chooses who they wanna deal with
5.Brothers and sisters treat friends....
6.Cousins talk about themselves like they aren't flawed. Cynthia Somtoochukwu.07035656953
I think it should be; The family isn't what it used to be, now everybody chooses nt choose, brothers and sisters and nt brother's... etc There's also wrong use of comma and lack of other punctuations, tired of typing Lol bad netwk here. 08166379265
ReplyDelete1.family is not what it was.2.now everybody chooses who he or she want to deal with.3.cousins talk about one anoda like they've got no flaws for one anoda........femi
ReplyDeleteThis is how I thought it should be (I'm not perfect though, but, I shall try):
ReplyDeleteFamily isn't what it used to be. there used to be a time when you could go to your grandma's house to eat, hang out with the family and have a good time. Now, everyone chooses whom they wants to deal with, Aunts and Uncles chooses which kids to be proud of, Brothers and sisters treats friends more like a Family, Cousins talks about each other like they aren't flawed, Grandparents spends time with certain Grandkids and the only time you see everyone together is at a funeral.
NAME: Donmekus C.Ebenezer
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EMAIL: greatdonmekus@yahoo.com or donmekus53@gmail.com
May God continue to bless you Tammy. keep on your good work.